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Post by Red Jolteon on Apr 20, 2009 23:43:10 GMT -5
One fullmoon night, three young trainers, Rebecca, Alexis, and Ana were playing outside, then the three of them decided to camp out in the front yard. Ana wanted to the most, since she loved the night. Rebecca was next, she LOVED thunderstorms, but was a bit afraid of the cold, and finally, Alexis, who was afraid of the dark, was freaked out and wanted to go inside, but the others talked her into it. They set up their tent and sleeping bags, and fell asleep a couple hours later. The next day, the strangest thing happened. They all felt fuzzy and small, and strangely, Ana felt feathery and light. What could have happened? Let`s get to them now. "What happened to me!?" Rebecca said, "I`m spiky and red, and I have a tail!" "I`ve got wings, I`m gray, AND I`ve got red rings!" Exclaimed Ana. "I`m blue, with a black bindi on my head!" *Pokes it* Alexis said. They had turned into Pokemon! Rebecca decided to call herself RJ, since she was a red Jolteon, Ana called herself WU, for Winged Umbreon, and Alexis called herself BE, for Blue Espeon.
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Post by Flareon on Apr 23, 2009 3:10:09 GMT -5
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Post by Red Jolteon on May 17, 2009 13:54:59 GMT -5
When RJ and BE were having little cat/dognaps, WU was having a flashback, and she saw something, and strangely RJ and BE were having a dream the exact same thing as WU`s flashback. "We were standing at the top of a rock holding our favorite Pokemon in special Pokeballs. Then, suddenly, a horrible storm came, and our Pokemon escaped out of their Pokeballs and ran away from us, never to be seen again, and we were caught, mistaken for Pokemon in our Pokeballs, Then sent out by no one, and we never acted the same again." WU explained when they woke up. "We had the same dream!" RJ and BE exclaimed, "That must have been how we turned into Pokemon!"
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Post by Flareon on May 17, 2009 15:43:16 GMT -5
I love it so far, keep up the good work
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Post by Red Jolteon on Jun 11, 2009 10:53:16 GMT -5
Later, RJ decided to check out their house to see what happened, it had turned into a Pokemon Center! "We really are in the Pokemon world!" BE yelled, "Why did it have to ha-" WU was interrupted, "Why don't we check it out?" RJ asked, everyone agreed. They went inside, to find a blue, pink, and gold Gardevoir taking care of the Pokemon instead of Nurse Joy, or Chansey! "It, it, it looks exactly like our home," WU said, "We should go downstairs to see if anything changed down there!" BE replied. They went downstairs and, to their surprise, it had turned into, a Poke-Sleepover realm! There was pizza, sleeping bags, and an entire stack of pillows! "Whoever did this, I LOVE YOU MAN!!" RJ exclaimed, "Don't scream! You could wake up the Eevees upstairs!" WU replied.
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Post by Flareon on Jun 11, 2009 11:54:36 GMT -5
add in more details, and this would be perfect, like add in detail of the surroundings and the style of the way your character talks. Other than that, I love the story line
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Post by Red Jolteon on Jun 25, 2009 20:34:53 GMT -5
RJ walked around in circles, trying to figure out what was going on, the big green couch was still there. She found a microwave with popcorn! "MY POPCORN!!!!!" WU yelled, "RAWR!!!" BE replied, "NO! MINE!!!" RJ exclaimed, "I FOUND IT!" A Gardevoir came down the stairs, "Stop yelling!" she said, "You'll wake the Eevees!" "Sorry." RJ said. "Here. I'll bring you upstairs. You should see it." said the Gardevoir, she took them upstairs, RJ ran to her room. "Wow!" she said, "My room hasn't changed! My computer is there, so is my loft bed!" She was as surprised as I was when I saw my first Pokemon!
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Post by Wecr1 on Aug 11, 2009 17:12:47 GMT -5
awsome so far ;D
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Post by Red Jolteon on Oct 6, 2009 23:15:10 GMT -5
RJ went to check out the files on the computer, they were still there. She was even more surprised when she found that there were drawings stuck under the keyboard. the only thing that changed about RJ's room was her TV. "Kyauun!!" She yells, "I forgot about WU and BE!" RJ ran down to a rock patch in the backyard, she spots WU with a bronze-colored stone in her paws. "WU! Where'd you find that?!" RJ yells, "I found it over there." *Points this way ->* said WU. "BE!! GET YOUR CAMERA!! I'll get the laptop!" RJ exclaimed. "What's with you today?" BE said, "That stone is one of a kind!!" RJ said.
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Post by Bloodspill Mercyguy on Nov 19, 2009 23:45:07 GMT -5
Awesome. You should keep on going!
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Post by Red Jolteon on Dec 5, 2009 20:48:53 GMT -5
After they took the rock to a museum, they set off on a journey to find Mew, because she dropped the rock. First, they set up camp near the rock patch, and fell quickly asleep. Later that night, BE was having an awful dream. She was dreaming that a giant rock was rolling down a hill, and she was trying to escape it. She woke up at 4:00 AM and made sure there was no giant rock. The coast was clear and no giant rock. She fell asleep again, not realising that the worst would eventually happen, but not now. The next morning, Just after RJ woke up, they all set out on their journey to the Land of Jewels. They arrived at a huge volcano. "I don't like this place." Said WU. RJ replied, "Don't worry. I've been here before. The Pokemon are low leveled." They entered the steaming hot volcano, and saw 5 Magby. "Psh, This'll be easy." said BE. They wiped out the Magby in no time. They all got to the top of the volcano, only to find Moltres. "Who dares pass... Wait, is one of you the Eevee that was trying to find her true identity?" Said Moltres. RJ spoke up, "That was me. I defeated you to find my true Identity." "RJ, You were turned into a Pokemon once before?" WU asked, "Yes. I'm sorry I kept it from you guys." replied RJ. "You shall pass. I am sorry." Said Moltres. All of the sudden, BE shouts, "Hey, Moltres? Will you come with us on our journey to the Land of Jewels?" "Of course I will!" replied Moltres, "Take this scarf" RJ gave Moltres a special scarf that symbolized their team.
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Post by Red Jolteon on Jan 11, 2010 22:43:07 GMT -5
As they moved on with their newly acquired friend, they traveled across barren lands, over high hills, and through ancient ruins. RJ stopped in front of an icy forest in a frozen land. "Wow!" WU said, "Those trees are completely frozen!" "RJ, You seem to know a lot about this world. Who lives here?" Asked BE. "Oh, I think Articuno lives here." Replied RJ. "Correct." said Moltres. They entered the forest, unaware of the Pokemon. BE found a sleeping Furret, and snuck past it quietly. they got to the end very quickly, because RJ was a little energetic and excited to meet Articuno again. "Articuno, I am the Eevee who passed through here about 3 years ago." Explained RJ. "You were? I'm happy to see you!" Replied Articuno. WU blurted out, "Hey! Will you join us, too?" "Of course I will! I remember that Jolteon there like she's my own chick!" "I have a scarf for you!" Said RJ, and then gave her a yellow scarf.
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Post by Wecr1 on Jul 9, 2010 20:22:37 GMT -5
nice but i think you are starting to take from mystery doungeon
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Post by Red Jolteon on Jan 21, 2011 13:21:09 GMT -5
It's based on Mystery Dungeon. This fanfic will probably not be updated anymore, and my poor writing skills won't make it any better. I'm going to lock this topic, now, because this is a terrible fanfic, and I'm writing a movie script based on it, so this isn't needed anymore. It will still be up, just, it won't be updated.
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